Hell-bent?
Graphics: The guys had no feet, but it's really your style. The movie clipping of them breathing was a pretty god idea until that guy's crotch was popping out from under the desk. Your masking was a little crappy, 'cause the guy's eyes drifted off their face and were cut off. The rope he climbed was badly animated. It doesn't sway, especially not in a straight line, when someone's climbing it. The blood was good. The scaling of the flattened guy sucked, though. Also, when guys die, then don't just fall over. They sort of snap and wiggle until their momentum drops to zero.
Style: The dialogue was real crappy 'cause he basically screamed out his plans. The rope thing was too cliche. And then there was that platform that crushed everyone. Horribly done.
Sounds: Some sounds were original and that's good, but some were really gay.
Violence: I would've given you a ten, but in the way some guys were killed, I refrained from doing so. The guys barely fought back.
Interactivity: W00t! Pause/play and scene selection! Good job!
Humor: Yeah, the only thing I thought was funny was when they shot the green guy by accident. If you thought the heart attack gag was funny, then you have a poor sense of humor.
Overall: It was alright. I can definitely say that I could do better 'cause I've got an animation coming out in Spring that is pretty good, but this deserves to be in the collection.