Definitely breakable
This was just as I expected. The movements were prostrate, the graphics shifted, too many ripped graphics, same, basic, non-original Madness plot, etc.
You also overused too many sound effects and the music ended early. The V-cam? Oh, don't even get me started on how bad that was. I suggest you practice more. You've got potential, but you're not using it.
K thanks for the review good luck with Redn ess I'm gonna try in MU3 to build on the story some more and graphics.
WTF?
Ninja's right. That looks just like Deuce's. What was it called, Odd World? Anyway, it's still awesome. The addition of that guy with the box for a head was well-animated. Good job on Onerosity, by the way. Keep up the good work!
hey man
WOW! WOW!
Graphics: Things were a bit fast at the end, but the detail was amazing, your 3-D was awesome and the blood was great. There's much more, but I doin't want to make my review so long.
Style: It was kind of cliche when you explained what was going on (Jebus tests Jimmy after he revived him). Also, you killed Jebus. I don't understand why he'd test him if he'd kill him. Ayways, everything else was great, in the storyline.
Sound: Too loud, man. But it was well-synched.
Violence: How many kills? I didn't count, but was it 70? 80?
Interactivity: N/A
Humor: This wasn't intended for the funny, but I got a kick out of a few things.
Overall: I thought this was simply restricted to MC.net. When I saw that it was on Newgrounds I almost screamed. I started to compare it to the old one. You added the giant zombie fighting Jimmy, the 3-D room, and everything after the screen says "Pac's turn." I really thought this was incredible, Jimmy. Can't wait for MO:3 or whatever you're going to call it.
13three7 is the official name.
Uh...
No. Just... no.
The animation was choppy and tweened apparently, the graphics were bad, the guy looked like he was fucking someone when he walked, and the characters, though they were detailed, didn't fit the style you gave them. I also couldn't understand a goddamn thing they said. Ingram, this fails.
The teaser might, but the full thing doesn't. And it's coming from someone with more flash than you, so you don't really have a say...sorry.
HUH?
What was that? Did you intend to show someone how to do something, because I got nothing. If you're going to make a tutorial, explain what you are doing. All you did was make a flash where a ball hit a block and you made a squiggly shape.
are you kidding? I showed you how to make movement with movieclips and collision with them. Then the collision brings you to another frame. I even paused at the scripts. Sorry that you just can't see that.
Good...
This is actually better than most Madness tributes. It was smooth and articulate, rather than simply making ripped graphics andtweening them. I believe you tweened, but it was smoother than most.
The blood was a little sketchy, and when you use the Alpha Transparency, make sure you don't move the whole screen because it looks bad. The walls also looked like they were on top of the victims. Don't do that next time. Aside from that, it was good. You get a 4 because you show actual effort, rather than most tributes do.
And once again...
... we have another failure tribute. Look, use a frame rate higher than 12, give credit to Madness interactive, because you ripped all of those graphics, make more lifelike movements, and have a plot.
And don't blame your failure on your age or attempt, because if you're going to submit something, it can't be crap like this. This isn't what we want to see.
rh I figured that I woundent really reply to this, because I know you are a good critizer, but this was another of my learning experiences and I had actually made this befroe I learned that you could actually increase the fram limit :P so ya thanks for the review though I plan to do much better in the future
Great for the first try!
Your first submission wasn't too bad. It was well-animated and had a good moral. (Quite a difference from Black Cock Down. LOL) Anyway, just checking this out. Good luck on ME5SE.
Lol. SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! SE is a secret!
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