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[Madness Enforcer]

What?

If this was a genuine first attempt, it was meh. The movements were too small and choppy. Work on a nice flow and use onions and easing.

If it was a spam cartoon, well, you kinda failed. This came out too slow.

hiddencamy responds:

It's not a spam cartoon
But thanks for the Advice

[Castle Repercussion - TSR]

Nice

I was never a fan of sticks. They always seemed too much of a novice's work - too easy to animate. Castle changed this. Your excellent cinematics combined with your pristine general animation and hightlighting/ shading, makes this a truly great series. I've noticed slight changes in your movements and styles of animation from the last Castle. You've definitely gotten more elaborate with your animation techniques.

Good luck on this part of the series. Looks very interesting.

Get-lost responds:

I'm glad to hear you see the actual graphics I put alot of hard work into, instead of getting stuck at the stick-figures as some people seem to do. Thanks alot!

[Kill Arena]

Very obvious Battlefield inspiration...

Not the best I've seen. I mean, the jumping looked tweened, the physics were meh and the guns kept changing size. =(

LittleLuckyLink responds:

Yeah, this is like, my first flash though, the third one I am working on will be better. Also, the jumping wasn't tweened because when I first started making flash I had no clue what layers were, so I only used one layer for this.

[Madness Streak Ep. 3]

This was horrible...

Simply horrible. Please make better wounds and don't tween too much or make stiff, lazy movements. If this is the latest one, you show no real skill.

I mean, the Nincompoop series is better than this.

GabrielBarsch responds:

but the nincompoop series is too short

[Waterlollies]

Jesus Christ!

What are you teaching impressionable, young kids about?

This movie featured stealing, public urination, the process of eating balls, and bullimia.

Lol, jk. Nice animation. I saw the Alpha and was looking forward to this for a while. I love how you've added highlights to your characters, now, instead of just shading. You've shown some real improvement, even from the YuYu, which was a good animation in the first place. You definitely deserve the top score on the 50. It will be nigh impossible to beat that score.

chluaid responds:

great to hear when people notice the little things (highlights, small details), and thanks for sticking around through all the delays that held up the release :)

[Clown Madness (short)]

Bad!

Very lazy. No music, very few kills, and the walking was a loop.

There was no hero. However, I suggest you become "an hero."

7IsUnlucky responds:

WHO FUCKING CARES

[HallowMadness 1]

WTF?

The length and sound are seriously f'd up. >=D

Delta66 responds:

Shoop a woop

[The Madness Box 2]

Lol, no

Grammar was horrendous. Also, you need to stop tweening. The plot was bland and this just dragged on.

Please try harder. Work on graphics, a good plot, and animation.

Kingpanda responds:

Now i find a review i can't just be happy about,or even follow the sugestions,if you wanna something FBF,ok,i will try to get better!
But...STFU about the plot,IT'S JUST RANDOMNESS ABOUT THE DAMN ORANGE BOX!
Can't you just understand,if i wanted to make a REALLY GOOD MOVIES,i would train,i would do FBF,i would get better on English(i am from Brazil!),i would draw this graphics MYSELF!But it's crapp,it's crap to be more funny,and if you just cares about the story and the style of animation,and don't actually cares about the JOKES,that's the perfect recipe to make a crap funny movie,but with very good jokes,look like REAL CRAP,that are these SPAM flashes!
Then one day someone will look at this same flash,steal the flash's jokes,and then put in a flash with GOOD animation,then everyone will think the jokes were good and ORIGINAL,but in fact it were form other guy that worked to make the DAMN joke,but he is the one who used the joke firstmand don't even got a bit of credit,and like now,someone might make a flash about VALVe's The Orange Box,but someone will put me in the credits for being the first to make The Orange Box jokes?Someone will credit for at least START this jokes,i din't start HL² jokes,but i started The Orange Box jokes,sure the first The Madness Box,even i agree it was REALCRAP with no jokes,but it makes a bit on this one's plot,so i left and don't delete it,but i am proud of this one and this one's joke!You can say my example of "Stealing Jokes" just happned a fell times,or never,but i STILL GOT A DAMN POINT IN THE DAMN PLOT!It's just funny with no SERIOUS plot,you can watch Maximum Ninja if you want a plot,but no,this was my first answer and last one!I will not dare to start a fight with someone that stupid to don't see that the jokes were the REAL MAIN THING!
So bye,and thanks for killing some minutes of your time to write your review!

-Kingpanda

[mummy madness]

Very choppy

Increase the framerate and try to make smaller movements. You have the right idea. You just need more time and practice. Also, the protagonist had WAY too many bandages. Take some lines off.

farfenwaffle responds:

finaly! somone who has made some cartoons!

[Madness Neurosis Collab 2]

Better

But not good.

YK Blaze: Your animation was OK. The walking was too slow. And your perspective was way off (whether this was for comical reason, I am not sure, but work on it). Also, you raped the MC7 tricky flames GFX. Red flames look nothing like blood.

Doodfayz: Too stiff. While you had the idea of movements, many parts of the characters didn't move when others did, causing a scarecrow look. The decimated wall was bad and the blood was WAY too big.

DayDayX: A tad hoppy and the shading was bad. However, you were by far the best animator here, by a longshot.

LLL: Your first part sucked. Too badly paced. The second part was better, but still a tad stiff. Use as many keyframes as you can, man.

Slipz: Not too bad, but try not to tween as much. Also, work on easing and physics. The chainsaw also roared when it stopped.

Delta: Your part barely had any animation. The blood and explosion were bad. =(

Overall, I'll give this a 3/5. Try harder next time.

YK-Blaze responds:

ok...thanks.....